spring_with_xan and it needs a beta reader. I've been looking at this damn thing for over two weeks and Oh God it just seems to suck for me.The fic is 6551 words long. BIG HUGE HONKIN' sex scene that I totally suck at writing, so I need someone to look that over and tell me what sucks about it so I can fix it.
Also: continuity, grammar, characterization, all that stuff needs to be looked at. I think I chickified Spike, and because I've been looking at the thing for so long, I can't find where I went wrong.
Needs to be back to me by Monday, as that's my posting day at the comm. Please help me??