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Shadows and Shadows 2/? 
8th-May-2008 10:21 pm
 Title: Shadows and Shadows
Author: gregryandanny
Fandoms: Buffy the Vampire Slayer/Angel
Pairing: Ethan/Giles, Gunn/Wesley, Angel/Lorne and Xander/Spike
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Xander is a half-wizard and half mage but moves to LA after Buffy and Willow found out the turth.
Warning: mpreg, violence, M/M slash, H/C, past rape.

(Chapter 2)

"Deadboy, Spike, where the hell am I?" asked Xander as he woke up in a strange room and bed. He saw the two vampires and cat-like demon standing next to the bed.

"Xander? What are you doing here? Is it about Buffy?" Angel asked as he worried if Buffy needed help.

"What about Dawn or Red?" Spike asked as he also started to worry about his Little Bit.

"Spike, she's dead," said Xander before he started to cry. The cat-like demon had left the room before Angel and Spike had starting asking question.

"Who's dead, Whelp?" Spike asked as his heart filled with despair.

"Dawn." Xander answered as he cried more, think about what Buffy had done to her little sister.

"What about Buffy?" Angel asked as he worried about his ex’s feeling for Dawn dying.

"Buffy got her killed, Wills and Buffy had killed her. They used her as bait for a pack of vampires." Xander said as he remembered the screams for help from Dawn.

"WHAT?" yelled Spike and Angel, both of whom were enrage with the Slayer’s and the Witch’s actions. Xander fell off the bed and crab walked away from them as they had moved closer to him.

"Xander, what's wrong?" Angel asked as he slowly followed Xander right into a corner.

"Please, don’t hurt me. Please" Xander begged as tears fall from his eyes and he curled up into a ball, trying to become as small as possible.

"Xander? We're not going to hurt you," Angel said as he kneeled in front of the boy, reaching out to brush Xander’s tears away.

"Please, Buffy, Willow, Please stop," Xander continued to beg, he was struck in a very bad flashback.

"Xander, what did Buffy and Willow do to you?" asked Spike after Angel had wrapped his arms around him.
"LET ME GO, DEADBOY, PLEASE, I HAVE TO GO BEFORE THEY FOUND ME,” Xander screamed and started to trashed around in Angel’s arms.

"What did they do to you?" Angel asked as he tightens his arms around the trashing boy.

"THEY RAPED ME, BEAT ME, USED ME LIKE A WHORE, GIVING ME TO DEMONS TO SAVE THEMSEVLES" shouted Xander as he cry harder than before and pushed his face into Angel’s collarbone.

"Shh, luv, shh, they'll die before they can get their hands on you again, I swear, luv" said Spike as he pulled Xander out of Angel’s arms and into his arms and rocked him. Angel stood up and looked at Xander in shock.
"SHE DID WHAT?" shouted Angel. His eyes were shifting to yellow and brown. Inside, his demon was fighting his bounds, Angel had tried to clam his demon down. But, Angelus wanted to kill the ones who dared to hurt his boy.
9th-May-2008 02:30 am (UTC)
Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon.
9th-May-2008 03:42 am (UTC)
Interesting. Looking forward to seeing how this goes. And finding out what sent Willow and Buffy over the deep end. Also what happened to Giles. ~Bee
10th-May-2008 12:48 am (UTC)
thank you:)

u just gave me the 7th chapter idea. *runs over, hugs and kiss windandsummer*
10th-May-2008 02:14 am (UTC)
*Hugs back* So glad I could be of help. XD ~Bee
10th-May-2008 02:41 am (UTC)

I have been looking for a co-writer. Interested?
10th-May-2008 04:01 am (UTC)
Sure I'd love to help in anyway I can. Just tell me what you need and I'll do my best. ~Bee
10th-May-2008 04:04 am (UTC)
k the next chapter going to be post soon. Please read over and point out mistakes. that all i need u to do until i have what chapters i have finished posted. Then u can help me with the next chapter. Still interested?
10th-May-2008 04:23 am (UTC)
Sounds great. I used to beta read on a regular bases. If you like you can email it to me at windandsummer@msn.com.
10th-May-2008 04:28 am (UTC)
thank u soo much. my head has been spinning trying to get this story done

u have any suggesting on the last 2 chapters u have read
10th-May-2008 04:47 am (UTC)
So far the story is really promising. Bringing in the well loved element of spander of course, also with the promise of a bit of hurt comfort. The mystery surrounding Xander's entrance is a nice one and I would suggest playing that out.

For example why he went to LA of all places, also what caused the physical changes. I believe that hes part demon now? I was wondering if the cat like reference has anything to do with the hyena possession or if it was something totally different.

My only negative things I would say about the first two chapters is that they're a bit confusing in the begining. The wording you used made it hard to understand who and what where present.

At first I wasn't quite sure if there was three beings present or two, and whether Xander was the cat like demon, or not. They both flesh out wonderfully though, and I think its simple a matter of working on wording.

On a story line bases I really like the direction of this piece. I love the way Spike connected right away, and the way the you gave Angel a large playing field.

10th-May-2008 05:09 am (UTC)

I am thinking maybe in the later chapters we can explain y he went to LA and what caused the physical changes. Unfortunaly no Xander is not part demon. the cat reference doesnt refer to the hyena possession but maybe we can use it later, how does that sound? also so people dont found out what going to happen. I got my own livejournal that we can communite on. if that k?
10th-May-2008 03:54 pm (UTC)
Yeah thats perfect. Do you want me to go and friend your personaly journal, or the journal you use for fanfiction?~Bee
10th-May-2008 08:43 pm (UTC)
my site is the following:

9th-May-2008 08:59 pm (UTC)
ooohh very interesting
10th-May-2008 02:45 am (UTC)
Huh. Makes me wonder what set Buffy and Willow off. A spell gone awry maybe? Whatever it was, I think Spike and Angel are going to take care of those two properly. *nods, nods*

10th-May-2008 03:14 am (UTC)
any suggests? Remember Giles and Ethan has to have fun too
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