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Thing/Drabble: Seasons of Eternity 
21st-Sep-2008 11:23 am
Author: Cobalt Mystic
Title: Seasons of Eternity
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: PG maybe
Feedback: Suit yourself, just no permanent damage, k.
Disclaimer: Just playing with the pretty kittens. Unfortunately, they are not mine, but I will gladly groom and bathe them before sending them back home to Daddy (aka Joss/Mutant Enemy/et al).
Warnings/Squicks: none really
Summary: This is one of those writings Mys generally labels as a ”Thing” ’cause she doesn’t know exactly what it is, it’s not quite fic and not quite poetry… it’s just a thing.

AN: So Mys woke up with a line in her head this morning and had to get it out... the rest of the words just seemed to come with it so, yeah...
Also, 's not beta'd so don't go blaming Xandra for any mistakes, she hasn't laid eyes on the thing, lol.


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Golden red leaves drifted to the ground, a fiery carpet laid out at his feet. The soft crackles and crunch as he walked a constant reminder of roaring flames shared with his lover. The cool autumn breeze like the tender touch of his love’s chilled skin.

…on he walked.

White snow, blinding in it’s purity, covered his path. It’s hard crystal shell giving way under his heated touch, just as his lover’s pale flesh had, taking him in. The cold hungry grip of one so unlike the passion filled hold of the other.

…on he walked.

New life, frail yet vibrant, exploding with renewal and second chances. As miraculous as his love’s return As delicate as his touch their first night together- and every time since. The offer, the prospect of a future in every step he took.

…on he walked.

Sunlight, warm and intense, deadly to the one he loved, kissed his skin- nothing compared to the waves of pure heat his love could inspire. The searing rays of the sun, cold and uncaring next to the burning passion of his lover.

…on he walked.

Almost complete. Full circle. Unity. Cool pale arms wrapping around him. Azure eyes washing over him. Undying love passing between them. His own tanned body melding to its mate. Rich chocolate eyes coating the creamy white body before him. His own love surrounding and melting with the other’s.

…on they walked.

Season to season- together, united. Night to day- the sun and moon. Yin and Yang- man and vamp. Eternal.
Comments 
21st-Sep-2008 09:23 am (UTC)
There's no link.
21st-Sep-2008 09:27 am (UTC)
*grumbles* 's what I get for trying to post too early in the AM, lol... forgot a ">" lol. All better now!
21st-Sep-2008 09:31 am (UTC)
Intense. I liked it.
21st-Sep-2008 11:43 am (UTC)
Thankies, dear! Mys always gets extra nervous when posting her "things", so happy FB is extra nice for these. *G*
21st-Sep-2008 02:19 pm (UTC)
It's pretty. Kinda contemplative and sad, as he's walking alone, until the end. I'm envious of your "things", as my hard efforts aren't nearly as good -_-, but I always enjoy seeing something new.
21st-Sep-2008 03:19 pm (UTC)
Aww thankies, yeah, Mys is a total schmangst whore, she has to fight tooth and nail not to be all schmangsty all the time, lol.
And don't sell yourself short (says she with the self-esteem of a troll, lol), I'm sure your stuff's wonderful!
21st-Sep-2008 06:46 pm (UTC)
This is a form of poetry. This was insightful and beautiful. Great job.
21st-Sep-2008 10:45 pm (UTC)
Shhhhhhhhhhhh, don't say such things! Mys and poetry are kinda like like Spike and poetry we deny we go together in any way, shape, and/or form! That said, thanks hun.
22nd-Sep-2008 02:41 am (UTC)
Its called a Haiku(I believe that is how it is spelt.) Its Japanese Poetry. I know SHHHHHH!!!!! *heehee*
22nd-Sep-2008 07:18 am (UTC)
*grrrrrr* Lol!
Ha! Mys has never been able to understand the concept behind Haiku, they remind her too much of those "Red Wheelbarrow" type poems (can't even remember what the bloody things are called, lol). *cringes and twitches like someone just rec'd her Spuffy*

Nah, years and years ago Mys used to write poetry, but, yeah, kinda had a William-y moment and she buried her pen. Then she discovered fanfic- hence, why Mys refuses to consider any of her stuff poetry. Okay enough with the TMI/share time, Mys has porn to write!
21st-Sep-2008 09:05 pm (UTC)
I like this. Thank you.
21st-Sep-2008 10:45 pm (UTC)
*G*
21st-Sep-2008 11:05 pm (UTC)
Just beautiful :)

Thank-you.
22nd-Sep-2008 07:07 am (UTC)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
22nd-Sep-2008 07:05 am (UTC)
Lovely!
Worth his wait.
22nd-Sep-2008 07:08 am (UTC)
Thanks! *G* Yeah, worth the wait for both of them I think... *feels sappy*
22nd-Sep-2008 10:56 pm (UTC)
awww
22nd-Sep-2008 11:08 pm (UTC)
Lemme try that again...

Hehe, Mys got "awwwed", yeah! *G*
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