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Into the Water (Spike/Xander) Chapter 17 
20th-May-2012 12:37 pm

Title: Into the Water
Fandom/Pairing: (BtVS) Spike/Xander
Chapter: 17/?
Rating: R - NC-17
Prompt: #10- Burn (and distract- once again, not intentional!) @ [info]kinda_gay, #28- consumer product @ [info]kinda_gay & #304- Dystychiphobia @ [info]tamingthemuse
Warnings: HAU, M/M, Language. Mentions of Xander/Anya (nothing explicit, just mentions. I promise), and mentions of Spike/Liam. And angst.
Summary: Spike Giles and Xander Harris are captains of the swim team. What will happen when they go to LA for a competition?
A/N: UNBETA’D. Yes, I know, its another High School fic. But I love them! Human!Spike is so much fun to write! *g* Previous chapters here.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the boys, no matter how much I beg and plead

Xander trudged wearily down the sidewalk towards Spike’s house. )
21st-May-2012 09:30 am (UTC)
The word is, "disdain", not "distain". There are quite a few other typos, darlin'. Were you in a hurry to finish? Just slow down, take your time and it'll be so sweet. . . .
24th-May-2012 01:03 pm (UTC)
Wow. That is incredibly patronizing, darlin'. It does say in the header that it hasn't been beta read, so a few typos aren't the end of the world. Grammar and spelling don't actually affect the story in general.
27th-May-2012 10:16 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the support here, but I know that I'm not a great writer in general, so Anon1's comment is still pretty valid :P
27th-May-2012 10:14 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the concrit. The typos are just because I'm not a great author :P
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